Sunday, December 04, 2005

Techniques for Surviving Auto-Submersion

As your vehicle splashes down, take a moment to appreciate its
buoyancy — . . .
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6 comments:

  1. Artichoke HeartDecember 04, 2005 6:01 PM

    Oh . . . wonderful. Darkly wonderful, like dark, bitter chocolate.

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  2. PeterDecember 04, 2005 6:28 PM

    Thank you, Lee Ann.

    . . . it will disappear soon.

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  3. A. J. Patrick LiszkiewiczDecember 04, 2005 8:12 PM

    Well, then I'm glad I caught it when I did. It's beautiful.

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  4. Pamela Johnson ParkerDecember 05, 2005 4:43 AM

    Agreed--this is beautiful. I love the couplets, and how the form gives the poem a more breathing room (no pun intended there--it's a really good effect).

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  5. cornshakeDecember 05, 2005 7:34 AM

    wow, you made one of my biggest fears somehow...pleasant?!! ;)

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  6. C. DaleDecember 05, 2005 11:16 AM

    Damn it. I missed it!

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